tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6727452664821328304.post3954544795902591573..comments2023-03-23T15:00:26.076+05:30Comments on Treading the (un)beaten track: In the EyesHappy hearthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02037352190477312136noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6727452664821328304.post-18955788375866852032009-12-02T13:02:02.411+05:302009-12-02T13:02:02.411+05:30Can someone explain the last two stanzas to me... ...Can someone explain the last two stanzas to me... apologies for being poetry immune, but I am bad with the form itself, what to do!Jaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10921850566867450869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6727452664821328304.post-52232907528335493112009-12-02T11:38:38.192+05:302009-12-02T11:38:38.192+05:30You are back to your romantic poetry! I will be ho...You are back to your romantic poetry! I will be honest: I feel like I have read this before, not the whole poem but the way it's put together. I was looking for some startling insight, which I didn't find. It's like some freshness is missing. Don't play it safe with the metaphors and similes. Push the boundaries a bit. Not all love poems need to be emotional. Someone once said Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com