Awaiting


A staggered note, split by a second

A second longer

To hear the note again

To see magic


A moment of inspiration, split by a day

A day longer

To hear the divine whispers

To face serendipity


A seed of pain, split by a lifetime

A lifetime longer

To reclaim heaven

To pay for redemption


A dollop of joy, split by a universe

A universe longer

To savor a nugget of bliss

To catch rapture

Comments

Anonymous said…
Very interesting! I like the use of a consistent form. I like the twist in that form as well. Also like all good poems it says more by not stating the explicit. Nice!

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diimaan said…
a nice one madamme... i liked it note by note... :)
i loved it start to finish...its just captures so many things....gr8t!!

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